When a person hears a story they
immediately understand the obvious meaning.
For instance, “Little Red Riding Hood” is an entertaining folk-tale;
however, beyond the obvious means hides a story warning children of worldly
dangers. Much like these stories, new
media has created numerous mediums that relay messaging to the populous. Many people believe the information these
mediums carry is solely important in deciphering meaning and cultural
value. However, rarely do they decipher
what the medium of that message says about a culture, and what messages such
mediums send.
For instance, Facebook is a medium
allowing people the means to communicate to long-distance friends. New media has created many social networking
sites, however, Facebook may very well remain the most popular. Facebook alone relays many messages without
the presence of millions of posts. For example,
one can conclude that American culture is a fast-pace society that values
speed. Information is readily given to a
person with literally the touch of a screen.
Facebook updates are sent straight to your phone immediately after such
updates are posted, relaying the message instantly.
Facebook also represents the
importance of communication in American society. This social networking site is
world-wide. An individual can instantly communicate
with someone from another country via Facebook.
However, this does not always result in positive outcomes. New media, including Facebook, illustrates
our cultural decline in face-to-face interaction. Face-to-face interaction holds importance in
communication, as bodily indicators, such as facial cues or body language, are
important in understanding a person’s true meaning or belief. With new media, virtual interaction often
trumps face-to-face communication, and such a switch in values can cause many
people to become socially awkward.
Another important message Facebook
presents is the importance of acceptance.
This medium allows people the opportunity to connect to society by
“friending” others. An individual can
unfriend just as easily. This ability to
choose who an individual communicates with gives people the opportunity to
surround themselves with common beliefs.
If there is a differing opinion, a person can easily remove this person
with the click of a button. This ability
allows people to feel accepted among others.
Facebook gives the illusion of acceptance through virtual friendship,
and encourages the myth that by friending Facebook friends, a person truly has
friendship in reality.
Along these same lines, Facebook
also influences what information a person receives. With the availability to choose what
information you receive, and from whom you receive it, an individual can isolate
themselves to only one idea by only choosing to “friend” a person who shares
the same beliefs or “unfriending” those with opposing views. For the many people who use Facebook as a way
to receive news and information this leaves out a counterpoint, something I
believe to be essential when determining strong opinions and beliefs. Though this is not true for everyone, more and
more people use this form of new media to connect themselves to other
individuals sharing the same opinions.
Facebook is a means of communication
to many, but what does Facebook communicate?
A famous quote by Marshal McLuhan states, “The medium is the
message.” There are many different ways
to interpret this quote. However, my
interpretation is though an individual can decipher culture values through a
retelling of information, the medium stands important because the medium
influences and holds values of its own. The
medium can influence what messages are relayed, and with new media sources like
Facebook people often receive only one-sided arguments. Facebook, as a popular source for information,
also reflects just as many cultural values as one of its posts. Therefore, it is important to venture beyond
the obvious when deciphering cultural values or deducting meaning. Yes, stories, shows, and the news reveal many
cultural values and determine what messages get across to the populous,
however, the medium equates in importance when determining what message is
truly being sent.
My first comment to your essay is are you sure this is a rough draft? this essay is really well done, and I am super impressed by the complexity displayed in your writing. I really like the way that you switch up the length of the sentences, and also how you start the sentences. The content is really well done, and your essay is completed centered around the prompt of the medium is the message.
ReplyDelete- Primarily, if all your rough drafts comes out like this, you are an incredible writer with too much time at your hands! hahahah just kidding.
ReplyDelete- Secondly, I saw some few punctuation errors that I recommend you edit (I wouldn't say so if I didn't think that this was a very good essay).
- Finally, I can see that you have a very in-depth analysis of the site Facebook, what functions it plays in people's lives etc. in addition to what pop cultural beliefs are embedded in the site and in users' posts. However, I feel like you are barely touching at what message facebook.com has as a medium. During my research, I found out that the message of the medium is the medium's mostly unnoticed effect on the people using it. How their behavior, worldviews, values, and beliefs change because of the medium's existence. That was just something to think about! Great job so far :)
This is a very strong draft of your essay. “The medium is the message” was explained very clearly and even helped me to better under your work. The way you touched on multiple points about Facebook and explained how each could have a negative or positive outcome was strong and easy to understand. The only thing I would suggest is that there are so many points you have touched on and gave brief explanations to each where, in my opinion, it could have been better to just stick with one point and elaborate more in depth on just that one. There are some paragraphs that have similar ideas so you could connect those into one to help.
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