Throughout
2012’s Presidential elections Americans have witnessed endless verbal attacks against
both President Barack Obama and his opponent Mitt Romney. What such ads neglect to mention, however,
are solutions to the issues he/she claims the other opponent is causing. Yes, while watching the unavoidable attack
advertisements that have been polluting television for the last few months, the
American populous has heard many end outcomes that sound appealing like the
creation of millions of job opportunities to lower unemployment rates, but what
these advertisements lack is an explanation of how they will achieve such
outcomes. Another important aspect
attack advertisements lack are the explanations of the attacks, and why what
they are attacking happened in the first place.
An example of such manipulating advertisements is an attack ad against
Obama regarding Janesville Wisconsin ’s General Motor plant.
At
the beginning of this advertisement, one can automatically assume discouraging
information will be presented. Its washed-out,
blurry coloring and the funeral-like piano background music adds to the
advertisement’s worrisome, discouraging message it is trying to communicate to
the public. By having the picture of a
power plant shot through a fence, with such colors and blurriness, makes this
failed power plant look so much like an abused, mistreated project one can
almost hear Sarah Mclachlan’s “In the Arms of an Angel” solemnly playing in the
background. What the beginning of this
ad fails to mention, however, is why this project failed, and more importantly,
what this project was about. It could be
easily assumed not many American citizens know much about the failing of the
General Motors plant in Janesville
Wisconsin , and this ad does
nothing to help with furthering your knowledge.
It focuses more on ‘broken promises’ and dramatic appearance. A big missing aspect in this advertisement is
why anybody should care. Did the failing
of this plant directly reflect Obama’s ability as President? Of course, a President cannot be without
faults. So why do so many people latch
onto these faulty advertisements as evidence of political failure?
The
answer to this question can be answered by examining such ads themselves. A person could conclude that any attack
advertisement, especially the one I presented, uses a scare tactic to receive
support, or to at least demolish the support of their opponents. With the sepia-like coloring, and the depressing
piano music, the message is already clearly a disheartening one. To add emphasis to the discouraging message,
this commercial overuses and emphasizes the phrases, ‘broken promises’ or ‘simple
promise’ ‘broken’, to appeal to the public’s value of trust. It is obvious that this advertisement is
promoting and air of distrust towards Obama.
By listening to Obama’s speech given in the commercial, he does not
directly make such a promise. However,
this ad sets up a straw man to encourage the misinterpretation of his speech in
order to dissuade people to vote for him.
Another
obvious value such advertisements expose is the value of drama. These ads lack civility, attacking their
opponents with harsh words and suggestions.
Instead of respect, these advertisements sell the myth that strong and capable
equals harsh and unyielding, even boarder line close-minded. For a President, it would seem a country’s
populous would fear such ideas as close-mindedness, but what these ideas also
sell is acceptance. A President, even in
the wrong, that agrees with an individual’s opinion and refuses to change
her/his mind makes this person feel accepted in a society that believes their
opinions to be wrong, whether or not for good reason. Each party tends to, but not always, focuses
on the insecurities of American’s, whether it be race, gender, or religion, and
twist that identity and make an individual feel insecure and secluded. Then, such candidates offer support and understanding
making the individual feel accepted, something greatly valued, by stating they
will represent the underrepresented.
Though
such advertisements often give information that may be important when coming to
the decision of the upcoming election, it is important for each individual to
fact check this information, and to make sure to hear counterarguments as
well. Understanding that an advertisement’s
entire purpose is to persuade the audience is important when deciphering
whether or not the information coming from such advertisements is legitimate. The “Broken Promises” commercial is an attack
advertisement, meaning it was probably fashioned with a one-sided
argument. This commercial was full of
misleading statements, uncivil attacks, and neglectful in its detailed
information. It is up to the viewer to
find the truth, or at least assorted opinions, and deduce your standing of the
issue based on various, credible sources.
The beginning for this essay, I feel, was very strong and your connections to the advertisement were relevant. However, towards the end, it seemed that your points became more cut-and-dry and somewhat off topic. If you could connect, of instance, when you start talking about how “Each party tends to, but not always, focuses on the insecurities of American’s…,” the statements are merely given and I feel that they could have been better used if there was a specific piece from the advertisement mentioned to connect this. The points made at the end of your essay are strong and could be used to make your essay very strong, however, they feel like pieces that were merely thrown in.
ReplyDeleteI like the example you used you could use it in your favor towards a very good essay. Your introduction catches the reader attention very much and it is strong. I would recommend to keep the strength of your essay and the details and the strong analysis throughout the rest of the essay since it seems that you kind of lose tract. I would also suggest for you to sound firm with your analysis and be sure about you connect, you have very good thoughts and ideas so keep it up! (:
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